LR- re-write introduction
To a certain extent I agree with the statement “Constant
media stories about going crime create a depressing and unbalanced picture of
black youngsters.” In the past few years’ youngsters’ whereas relating to the
question youth representation in general has been developing from positive to
simple, negative and now complex as they have been reported miserably this is
because society has socially constructed a meaning and labelled youths as
negative and black youths as dangerous and criminals. However, a vital factor the media has represented black youths as negative. This is because the media decides to gives us certain news they do when and how much this refers to Gramsci's theory of hegemony which divide class and how much information is given my the journalist to the audience.
WWW- Raised excellent points with examples
EBI- Didn't answer question
EBI- Didn't answer question
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